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Nick Buchheit's avatar

This read like a good short film. Well done.

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Jessica Maison's avatar

Thank you! So appreciate the read and the comment!

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williamphaynes/elliott's avatar

Enjoyed your horror scare

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Jessica Maison's avatar

So glad!

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Hanna Delaney's avatar

I'd never heard of this legend before. I always learn something new from you, Jessica. Great work.

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Focal Bonsai's avatar

I've only recently learned of the black eyed children and I really enjoyed your spin on the tale. Terrifying.

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Jessica Maison's avatar

Thank you! They are so creepy and sad. Haunting little entities. I am so glad you enjoyed my take on them.

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Saint-Lazare's avatar

I saw it like a movie in my mind, amazing work!

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Jessica Maison's avatar

That’s amazing! Thank you⭐️

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Madstack of Mac's avatar

You worked hard on this! I think your effort is paying off. This is great.

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Mkwawa shujaa's avatar

You took the black eyed children legend and made it feel fresh and terrifying. Nice story, thank you for sharing

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Jessica Maison's avatar

So glad you thought so! I had some fun with these creatures for sure.

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Nancy Waddell's avatar

Awesome story, I love those tales about black eyed children, very creepy!

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Jessica Maison's avatar

Thank you! They are so creepy. I think I might die if one came to my door because I would have a hard time not letting a kid in.

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