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Nov 10Liked by Jessica Maison

Id love to know the rest of the story. Excellent premise.

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Thank you! Pretty sure I am going to expand it.

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Nov 9Liked by Jessica Maison

It would be interesting to see where this story goes. I like it so far.

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Good to hear from you on this. I did always want it to have a part two. Thanks for letting me know. I appreciate your feedback.

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Nov 9Liked by Jessica Maison

Cannot wait for part 2.

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Nov 9Liked by Jessica Maison

Wow that is the most terrifying short story I've read in a very long time. What really makes it horrifying is this could be our reality two years from now. I really want to know what happens to Jolene

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Thank you for reading and commenting. Means so much to hear from you. Yeah, it scares me too. I do think a part two is in order but it might be even more terrifying-although filled with some satisfying twists

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Nov 8Liked by Jessica Maison

I want to see what happens next in the story.

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Thanks for letting me know! I do too so a second part may be in order.

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Nov 8Liked by Jessica Maison

Agreed

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I guess it will all sort out eventually and people will just live.

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Nov 8·edited Nov 8Author

It could if all people start thinking more critically. Meaning, it won't just sort itself out if we don't actively fix things.

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Now say that in German

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Sorry, I don't speak German.

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