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Samira Hibbler's avatar

The imagery is so well done. I love monster stories, so I especially loved this. I'd love to read more if you decide to expand it!

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Jessica Maison's avatar

Thank you! Thanks for reading. I too love monsters so I'm glad we connected!

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S.L. Stallings's avatar

Great start to a story, I hope you continue! Now I want to work on mine. It was on the back burner until I got these two serial episodes finished. I love the grossness of it and the setting is 100% perfect!

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Jessica Maison's avatar

Thank you! I do want to write more of it. I just need to make time for it. I definitely want to read yours when you write it!

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Shawn Brooks's avatar

Well done! It works as is or you could also expand it like you said.

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Jessica Maison's avatar

Thank you! I am kind of itching to expand it and maybe do a comic with her in it. We will see. Really appreciate the read and the comment⭐️

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Shawn Brooks's avatar

That’d be cool to read!

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Vince Roman's avatar

Loved this!

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Jessica Maison's avatar

So glad! Thanks for reading!

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Nick Winney's avatar

Grisly!

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