Wow, this was fantastic! A well deserved win for a great story. You are so good at creating that sense of tension between the siblings then a gradual easement as they get reacquainted. You relaxed the reader also before you threw us into the sudden horror of it all. So dang good😈.
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you thought the storytelling was effective. This is one of my favorite little stories. Physical and mental distance between siblings is something I like to explore from time-to-time. It's way more fun when all hell is going to break loose.
Congrats on the win!
Thanks!
Wow, this was fantastic! A well deserved win for a great story. You are so good at creating that sense of tension between the siblings then a gradual easement as they get reacquainted. You relaxed the reader also before you threw us into the sudden horror of it all. So dang good😈.
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you thought the storytelling was effective. This is one of my favorite little stories. Physical and mental distance between siblings is something I like to explore from time-to-time. It's way more fun when all hell is going to break loose.
great imagery in the bonfire scene!