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Cotina's avatar

Wow! This was a great, suspense -filled story. You did a great job conveying the fear that Rachel felt. Not only fear of the Dogman but the realization that terror doesn't always come from the unknown.

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Jessica Maison's avatar

Thank you! I'm so glad it hit right with you. Really appreciate your comment. I was trying to capture that moment when you're young and you were still afraid of monsters but also were beginning to realize that the world was filled with far worse things.

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Hanna Delaney's avatar

Oh, the dogman sounds terrifying 😱

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